Post by MagnificentBeard on Jun 2, 2016 19:30:32 GMT -8
Nothing major, but I felt it worth pointing out.
The first error seems to be in the audio. Before the battle in the ion storm when all the pilots respond to Kayto's order's with "Understood!", it sounds like the prototype's electronic voice (Love that voice effect by the way) is fairly clearly heard. Considering she got cut out of comms, that seemed a bit odd.
Second is a spelling error. Kayto grace's us with the line "This will be our final battle. Nothing will going to stand between us and our home." On their return to Cera
If I find anything thing else, i'll stick it up here. I coulda swore there was some other minor error I came across earlier, but I only just now thought of bringing them up. Whoops.
Edit: And another one. In the mess hall with everyone Asaga thinks "(No... That's... not want I want* at all...!)" Edit 2: Looks like quite a few slipped through round these parts. After the Alpha's talk with the Wanderer, Alice thinks Arcadius* as Acadius*. Edit 3: I thought there were far more dedicated grammar Nazis with access to the beta than I. After that with Asaga and Sola, "She's* isn't one of us." Edit 4: "Shield's sat with Chigara on his lap on* at his bureau. Edit 5: Misaligned apostrophe in Shield's name (Shields')* after Chigara is chased out of his office. Edit 6: Immediately after the first battle for Cera from Icari, "There're"*
Post by MagnificentBeard on Jun 3, 2016 2:02:38 GMT -8
Fixing text would do that? Such as it goes, but that'll be unfortunate for anyone new who plays it in the future that can't stand these kinds of things. Especially for all the people at the Liberation Award Ceremony that got Rendered*
Oh! Oh! I wanted to make a thread on this but ended up didn't. Hold on, I had a word document on this. Gimmie a sec. .. ...
" Typos! Post the typos you found here! “He marched out of the sickbay, a mischievous grin plastered all of his face...”
Right before the scene where Shields is rescued by Ava and are now talking in Lifepod 15. It said T-minu 46 hours before the Liberation Day Massacre, 10 hours until Chigara enters the mind stream. Right after, it says T-minus 50 hours before the Liberation Day Massacre, 14 hours until Chigara enters the mind stream.
“Shields could hear Sola’s raspy breathes behind him.”
“Sola ran to him, concern for Shield’s health the only thing in their eyes.”
“An enormous cavern of steel, surrounded by all sides by enormous spires.”
Alice: “But this is where you mission ends!”
Past Kato: “Good. Begin sortie immediately! The map filling up with red all around us.”
“All of the Paladins’ missile pods opened, sending streams of smoke spiraling outwards. The Ascendant numbly dodged through the missiles. The missiles which did impact put nary a scratch the ancient ryder’s frame.”
“Ava faced palmed.”
“In the end... I think she would be proud. She will always be remembered as the savior the galaxy.” "
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