Liberation Day release version typos

1. Original: Ava: Warning, new hostiles inbound! Pirate forces, on a intercept course!
Fix: On an intercept

2. Not sure why I didn't notice this before, but there seems to be steam in the shower room, even though Icari's taking a cold shower. Maybe you should just take out that bit about the shower being cold.

3. Original: Icari: You better prepare yourself! I'm not gonna be out drank by a choir boy like you!
Fix: outdrunk

4. Original: He leaned in to Chigara's ears.
Fix: He leaned toward Chigara.

5. Original: Fontana: But it shall be time which wither away the wealth of the imperialists.
Fix: withers away

6. Original: Claude offered to Shields some pain numbing lubricant.
Fix: offered Shields

7. Original: Asaga laid awake on her bed.
Fix: lay awake

8. Original: Ava: We have received various contracts to fulfill on route to Cera from our various partners.
Fix: en route

9. Original: Ava: The Alliance has received word of strange disappearances occuring in the Pacemus Nebula.
Fix: occurring

10. Original: Last week, PACT has docked a fleet at the Union's stations in Tydaria...
Fix: PACT docked a fleet

11. Original: and arranged an Alliance fleet to drop in and sink the PACT fleet.
Fix: arranged for an Alliance fleet

12. Original: Kayto: And thanks to that, the Alliance overlooks the fact that they've been getting shelled with Union made missiles the entire war.
Fix: Union-made

13. Original: Kayto: All right, let's cause enough of mess here so that the Alliance can perform their diplomatic mission.
Fix: of a mess

14. Original: Kayto: This will be our final battle. Nothing will going to stand between us and our home.
Fix: Nothing will stand

15. Original: Asaga: No... That's... not want I want at all...!
Fix: not what I want

16. Original: Alice: To think the great Acadius gave his life for those lowlifes!
Fix: Arcadius

17. Original: Asaga: She's isn't one of us!
Fix: She

18. Original: Shields sat with Chigara on his lap on at his bureau.
Fix: on his lap at his bureau.

19. Original: Kayto: What's the situation.
Fix: What's the situation?

20. Original: Alice: We are surrounded. Out numbered. Out powered.
Fix: Outnumbered. Outpowered.

21. Original: Icari: A-are you crazy!? The Libety's spinning like a yoyo!
Fix: Liberty

22. Original: Sola: Target successful.
Fix: Attack successful

23. Original: Kayto: Shields patted Chigara on head.
Fix: Shields patted Chigara's head.

24. Original: Icari: By the time this is over, I wouldn't be surprised if that actually turns out being the case...
Fix: turns out to be the case

25. Original: Asaga: But they've got another thing coming if they think their tricks are going to work!
Fix: Strictly speaking, the phrase is "another think coming;" suggest "But they're wrong if they think..." so you don't have two "thinks" so close.

26. Original: Asaga: (I'm the only who...!)
Fix: the only one who

27. Original: Chigara lied beside Shields
Fix: lay beside

28. Original: Fontana: The second fleet has already pledged their loyalty to me.
Fix: has already pledged its (singular verb, singular pronoun)

29. Original: Fontana: They are no longer comrades to the revolution, but merely your brain washed puppets.
Fix: brainwashed

30. Original: Alice: Did you think that I would leave you with the second fleet with no back up plan?
Fix: backup

31. Original: Ava: I-impossible! The second fleet has just powered their engines!
Fix: has just powered its (singular verb, singular pronoun)

32. Original: Chigara: I will enter the prototype's neural link and attempt to interfere with their thoughts!
Fix: prototypes'

33: Original: Prototype: And by fortune, your path crossed with Shields, the would be savior of the galaxy.
Fix: would-be

34: Original: Prototype: We allowed your free reign in your interactions with him so we may learn his machinations.
Fix: free rein

35. Original: Alice: Hahahaha! Pathethic!
Fix: Pathetic

36. Original: Kayto: (There's nothing on the field which can counter it!)
Fix: In this case, use "that" instead of "which"

37. Original: Ava: How say we fire every shell, laser, and missile at it and see how it fares against the full might of humanity's wrath.
Fix: Replace period with question mark.

38. Original: Sola: Legend speaks that the Myr'lan'dur single handedly destroyed...
Fix: single-handedly

39. Original: Kryska: This is the best time to show the galaxy that freedom will win over the tools of long dead tyrants any day!
Fix: long-dead

40. Original: Fontana: It was made by the hands of man, and it can be fallen by the same.
Fix: felled by the same

41. Original: Admiral: If we lose here, against just one ryder, my offspring will become laughstocks for the next ten generations.
Fix: laughingstocks

42. Original: Fontana: No longer will we overlook the suffering of our people for reckless misadventures on foreign lands.
Fix: in foreign lands

43: Original: Icari: S-seriously... W-who the hell do I think I am...
Fix: do you think

44. Original: Admiral Grey held hands with Fontana...
Fix: shook hands

45. Original: Admiral: ... While we mourn for those who lost their lives, must also commemorate the living.
Fix: we must also commemorate

46. Original: Shields stood to his feet.
Fix: Shields rose to his feet.